Little Wood Box

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  1. LooknGlass said:

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    In a little wood box
    lies her greatest treasure
    A priceless gem
    it's worth can't be measured

    (Vs)
    In a little wood box
    There's a pair of shoes
    A special gift
    for church and school

    (Ch)
    She wants to run to it
    Wants to look inside
    But she can only sit
    and stare wide eyed
    There's someone talking
    she can't hear
    There's music playing
    soft somewhere
    But she just hears the clock
    as she stares at a little wood box

    (Vs)
    In a little wood box
    There's a pair of glasses
    They're custom made
    In the latest fashion

    (Vs)
    In a little wood box
    Is a little bow tie
    Made it herself
    for her special guy

    (Ch)
    Her husband helps her up
    holds her close to him
    walks her through the crowd
    people watching them
    If it wasn't for him
    she couldn't move
    It's seems so surreal
    so untrue
    And finally when they stop
    she looks into that little wood box

    Just eight years old
    in his young prime
    Made it to school
    but never left this time
    Her dreams shot down
    in the blink of an eye
    a man took his life
    she still wonders why

    (Vs)
    In that little wood box
    she brushes off his shoes
    straightens his glasses
    and his bow tie too

    (Vs)
    In that little wood box
    lies her greatest treasure
    A priceless gem
    The worth can't be measured

    © L. James Tanner
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    This one,for some reason,gave me the "creeps"!It was,I thought,a little Hitchcockian.It's probably just me,but it's another good one!
     
  3. LooknGlass said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    This one,for some reason,gave me the "creeps"!It was,I thought,a little Hitchcockian.It's probably just me,but it's another good one!
    Thanks for reading Doug. It was the shock value I was going for, to bring this sad, horrific school shootings into perspective. If I can elicit emotion, I'm happy, although sometimes it's not a feel good emotion......"Hitchcockian"...I like that saying for some reason. Appreciate the comment man.
     
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    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    WOW!!! This is great! (Sometimes I follow Doug around to find all the good stuff!!!)
     
  5. Eccer's Avatar

    Eccer said:

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    This is actually a great story. And I would have loved to hear music to this, I think it lacks that final touch. Get it down man!