My Sweet Desire

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  1. ReturnOfTheAmazingStart said:

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    Hey again all.
    I wrote these lyrics in the beginning of the year. I won't reveal the meaning behind them just yet.
    Curious of what you may think of them.
    Feedback appreciated.




    MY SWEET DESIRE

    You catch my eyes with your enticing looks
    I just know I gotta have you, no matter what
    Slowly I approach you, I'm the predator, you're the prey
    You've caught me in your web, I'm dangling from your hook

    You make me happy, rushing through my blood
    I can feel your sweet taste in my mouth and I like it
    Outta control, I need more until I can't stop
    You got me addicted and I never thought you would

    (chorus)
    My sweet desire
    I'm under your spell
    My sweet desire
    I can't help myself

    You were in my life for so many years
    I would always come back to you despite trying to flee
    I tried so many others but no one came close to you
    You're not by my side anymore and it brings me to tears

    ( 2 x chorus )
    My sweet desire
    I'm under your spell
    My sweet desire
    I can't help myself

    Like sugar, like honey
    That's what you are
    My sweet desire
    How did it get so far
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Looking back with a Sigh of "Damn it, I tried others, but none was like you".
    You are honest enough that it was your own fault "despite trying to flee"
    Learning to live with that knowledge is probably better than forcing your way back into her life.
    I have the experience that however much you may be under the spell of someone afterwards it mostly,if not most certain
    will not impress them!

    I wish you luck. Thanks for sharing
     
  3. ReturnOfTheAmazingStart said:

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    Thank you for your reply Amaryn.

    I can reveal that the lyrics are about my sickness. I was told I had diabetes and suddenly I had to make changes to my life.
    So I decided to write about my desire for something I no longer can/should have. Sweets, soda, chocolate, sugar etc.
    You know, my sweet desire. ;-)
     
  4. ReturnOfTheAmazingStart said:

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    Hopefully I'll get these lyrcs made into a song like I did with Hollywood Ending. :-)