Either This Or That

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  1. Zakynthos said: 11-11-2013 10:20 AM

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    Doug Denslowe said: 11-11-2013 03:20 PM

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    Zak!I #%#^*%ing love this!It's short and sweet,and makes one........ah,feel a little creepy,if you get my drift.I'm glad your back!One last thing;I like This or That better than That or This.
     

  3. Zakynthos said: 11-17-2013 07:35 AM

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    Haha, thanks again, Doug! I thought "that or this" would sound better because it rhymes with "dreams". Should I change it?
     

  4. Zakynthos said: 11-17-2013 07:42 AM

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    Perhaps I should find another title, I don't like it now. lol
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 11-17-2013 02:36 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zakynthos View Post
    Haha, thanks again, Doug! I thought "that or this" would sound better because it rhymes with "dreams". Should I change it?
    Rhymes with dreams??!?
     

  6. Zakynthos said: 11-17-2013 10:06 PM

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    I thought they could be "near rhymes". Maybe it's "these" that rhymes with "dreams", sorry.
     

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    Doug Denslowe said: 11-18-2013 05:04 PM

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    Zak,after thinking about your poem and it's title,I like "This or That".It's simple and easy to remember.Your right,"near rhymes"are cool,as is this poem!
     

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