16 women
Made a meal of me
Drove me into
Bankruptcy
Took my house
Took my car
Took my money
My tip jar

I'm Bleeding Money
Nothing funny
About it at all
It's so raw
It's so bad
It's so sad
It ain't funny
Bleeding Money

17 trillion
National debt
Obama failed
Nothing left
Treasury's broke
On our knees
Owe it all
To the Chinese

We're Bleeding Money
Nothing funny
About it at all
It's so raw
It's so bad
It's so sad
It ain't funny
Bleeding Money

Gas has tripled
Rent's sky high
I'll be a pauper
When I die

I'm Bleeding Money
Nothing funny
About it at all
It's so raw
It's so bad
It's so sad
It ain't funny
Bleeding Money

jimcolyer.com

I only have one thing the verse "Gas has tripled" needs four more lines.
Our kids will pay
for our failures
they'll all say
help us in their prayers

That's just a suggestion if you want you can expand but it needs four more lines to maintain consistency.

Fantastic. It's bleeding cool.

i like it dude!! protest and fight what confines you till you destroy the bars confinement!!