Hey guys, this is the first song I have ever written. I just wanted to get some feedback to see what people think.Please send any comments you have.

A cold wind blows on the bench tonight
and the rainwater soaks my shoes
On my own I’ve tried to make things right
but all I’ve done is lo-se

A rebel without a cause
A poet without a dream
A lover without love
Without Him, What are we?

Can we surrender?
Can we lift our hands,
and let down our walls,
and give Him glory?

Our battle has been won
truth has conquered lies
Life has conquered death
Now our saviour asks…

Can we surrender?
Can we lift our hands,
and let down our walls,
and give Him glory?

I ran away from fear
And I ran from my dreams
I ran to keep running
without a cause

But Lord I’m do-o-one!
Lord I follow You-ou-ou!
Lord I’m Do-o-one!
Lord I follow You-ou-ou!

But Lord I’m do-o-one!
Lord I follow You-ou-ou!
Lord I’m Do-o-one!
Lord I follow You-ou-ou!

Oh-oh-
oh-Oh
Sat-an’s got no power
ov-er me-ee