my first song

Yea i usually write like sappy love songs..but this one was kinda really different:P....tell me what ya think..i got music for it to

Second Hand Smoke

Left behind the curtain, the show begins
If this love is worth it, i'll know exactly who wins
Hes blowing his cover, oh lover
How rude of you not to introduce Mr.Significant other
No I Never thought youd right me off this quickly
But I must admit, im ready to watch you commit your sin
Is your stomach turning upset and sickly
Your completely unawair of the sunlight shining in

Don't let me throw your dreams into this act of love
Im simply returning the favor, the timing was just off
Reacting this way, I know that youll provoke
Hes your last minute lover, your second hand smoke

Your Hands are trembling,so your liking it I assume
And yes, im perfectly aware of the camera in the room
Time for revenge princess, do you see the turning other
stare into my eyes, and to hell with the covers
Into my bed, your seeing and youve guessed
lessons weve both learned, your watching me undress
Do you even know me, would this you expect?
running your fingers down his spine, I sat there and wept

Don't let me throw your dreams into this act of love
Im simply returning the favor, the timing was just off
Reacting this way, I know that youll provoke
Hes your last minute lover, your second hand smoke

An over achiever, what a burn i'll comit
When this crime is all over, is it you I will miss?
Two acts of hatred, but one act of love
My thoughts to this blade,and to your heart I will shove

Don't let me throw your dreams into this act of love
Im simply returning the favor, the timing was just off
Reacting this way, I know that youll provoke
Hes your last minute lover, your second hand smoke

Originally Posted by brycer29

Yea i usually write like sappy love songs..but this one was kinda really different:P....tell me what ya think..i got music for it to

Second Hand Smoke

Left behind the curtain, the show begins
If this love is worth it, i'll know exactly who wins
Hes blowing his cover, oh lover
How rude of you not to introduce Mr.Significant other
No I Never thought youd right me off this quickly
But I must admit, im ready to watch you commit your sin
Is your stomach turning upset and sickly
Your completely unawair of the sunlight shining in

Don't let me throw your dreams into this act of love
Im simply returning the favor, the timing was just off
Reacting this way, I know that youll provoke
Hes your last minute lover, your second hand smoke

Your Hands are trembling,so your liking it I assume
And yes, im perfectly aware of the camera in the room
Time for revenge princess, do you see the turning other
stare into my eyes, and to hell with the covers
Into my bed, your seeing and youve guessed
lessons weve both learned, your watching me undress
Do you even know me, would this you expect?
running your fingers down his spine, I sat there and wept

Don't let me throw your dreams into this act of love
Im simply returning the favor, the timing was just off
Reacting this way, I know that youll provoke
Hes your last minute lover, your second hand smoke

An over achiever, what a burn i'll comit
When this crime is all over, is it you I will miss?
Two acts of hatred, but one act of love
My thoughts to this blade,and to your heart I will shove

Don't let me throw your dreams into this act of love
Im simply returning the favor, the timing was just off
Reacting this way, I know that youll provoke
Hes your last minute lover, your second hand smoke

I like your sont. Your are a good artist, keep going you are on the right path.