This Planet

You're the only woman
On this planet
I care about
You're the only woman
On this planet
I can't live without

There are trillions of
Other planets
Maybe quadrillions of women
But you're the only woman
On this planet
I care about

Uninspiring and plain. I do not know why the subject cares about this woman so much. His desires are not revealed. What is so special about this woman. The mystery remains as your writing is unrealized. Grade: C