I Want Your Baby (female)

Thread: I Want Your Baby (female)

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    Jim Colyer said:

    Default I Want Your Baby (female)

    I need a man
    Every night
    Someone I love
    Someone I excite
    The time is now
    It's now or never
    So make me a mommy
    I'll make you a daddy

    I want you
    I want your love
    I want your sex
    I Want Your Baby

    I need someone
    Knows what to do
    Who's not afraid
    It's got to be you
    Spill your sperm
    In ecstasy
    Into my tubes
    Impregnate me

    I want you
    I want your love
    I want your sex
    I Want Your Baby

    I wanna change some diapers
    You can change some too

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    I need a man
    Every night
    Someone I love
    Someone I excite
    The time is now
    It's now or never
    So make me a mommy
    I'll make you a daddy

    I want you
    I want your love
    I want your sex
    I Want Your Baby

    I want you
    I want your love
    I want your sex
    I Want Your Baby

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  2. pq92k said:

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    The first six lines of the lyrics show a modicum of potential, but it falters as you continue to read. The third line of the chorus, "I want your sex", is also a well-known line from a George Michael tune "I Want Your Sex". The second verse ("Spill your sperm/In ecstasy/Into my tubes/Impregnate me") should be reworked...yikes! A female's desire to reproduce is strong and can provide ample amounts of interesting things to write about. These lyrics are not even considered to be pedestrian. They are tacky and trashy. Grade: Verse (C-); Bridge (D+); Chorus (D+)