A Little Self-Pity
Never hurt anybody
But I'm wallowing
In it tonight
All alone
Thinking of him
Lying here wishing
For daylight

A Little Self-Pity
May be good for the soul
But I'm so depressed
Down in this hole
Cos I know
Know where she is
Asleep in his bed
She's all his

I watched them stroll out
Of the restaurant
Holding hands and kissing
That's what I want

A Little Self-Pity
Never hurt anybody
But I'm wallowing
In it tonight
It's so hard
Being in love
Knowing he'll never
Hold me tight

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