I'm from Fort Worth, TX and just finished tracking an album in the studio. Found this website and thought it would be nice to get some feedback on lyricism. I understand and completely agree with reviewing others lyrics and will do! Here is a link to our facebook page as well: https://www.facebook.com/noahsarkitech


Feet First
lyrics written by Lewis Wall of Mountain Kid

I saw it float through the wall: something strange.
A supernatural ball circled my brain.
It tried to speak through the wind to push me off.
As I stood on my bridge, I heard it scoff.

Feet first into the ground running your race
Feet first into the ground can't earn grace

Like a flightless bird you stick your head in the ground.
You shake in quiver to every sound...
Oh it's true how you move deeper down

Feet first into the ground running your race
Feet first into the ground can't earn grace

So peeking honestly, you're not the first I've seen.
All of your prophecy is nothing more than schemes.
You intermittently slithered into my dreams.
You're just hypocrisy having shed underneath...
All the snoozing heads of the dying men
Consuming pointless texts tickling ears instead.
So go your way from me- horripilating cease.
You are no friend to me now take your lies and leave.