Does this structure work?

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  1. Jsimkov said:

    Default Does this structure work?

    Woke up this morning
    a pounding in my head
    A questionable decision beside me
    sleeping in my bed
    Empty bottle on the table
    And a bill on the mirror
    My eyes are blood shot as hell
    I've never been clearer

    the life I'm leading is gonna kill me,
    in the meantime I'll just wait
    It's better to leave the party early
    than to leave too late

    I've loved and lost
    cursed the cross
    asked for answers
    received no response
    I've spent nights in jail
    and lost all my bets
    Ive been lost my whole life
    I still have no regrets

    the life I'm leading is gonna kill me,
    in the meantime I'll just wait
    It's better to leave the party early
    than to leave too late

    The ship's safe in the harbor,
    the car in the garage
    I've got the cannon loaded
    ready for the barrage
    You can't run from the inevitable,
    keep telling yourself that lie
    Throw on a Blackhawks jersey
    and channel Cameron frye

    the life I'm leading is gonna kill me,
    in the meantime I'll just wait
    It's better to leave the party early
    than to leave too late

    When the lights finally come on
    and I'm ushered towards the door
    I'll be the one buying another round
    as they're sweeping up the floor
    I may not be remembered,
    but I'll never be forgot
    You can't choose the life you've been given, but you determine the life you sought

    the life I'm leading is gonna kill me,
    in the meantime I'll just wait
    It's better to leave the party early
    than to leave too late

    They say the life I'm leading
    is going to do me in,
    I'm too drunk to hear them
    as I sip on my gin
    Good guys finish last
    and complacency never wins
    Go poke something tonight
    And lead a life of sin

    The party's almost over,
    I think I'll make my escape
    I'd rather leave too early,
    than stick around too late
     

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