Please check my Spanish lyric

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  1. Nicksline said:

    Post Please check my Spanish lyric

    Living Los Angeles and being half Mexican, Spanish was my first language but I have gotten really bad at it especially the writing. And on top of that I am trying to write lyrics for a song so that make it poetry with is even harder because it has to make sense without making perfect sense.

    Here is what I've got so far can someone help me make it right? The syllables count has to be the same in each line please.

    "En mi fe sera
    Que estas aqui
    y entras en mis suenios, te siento ayi

    Lejos, nunca estas
    Y ademas
    Te fuieste pero siempre estas aqui"

    Thank you!

    Nick P
     
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    heksje said:

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    en mi fe sera
    que estas aqui
    y entras en mis sueños, te siento ahí

    lejos, nunca estas
    y ademas
    te fuiste pero siempre estas aqui


    That's so beautiful !!! it has some minor spelling issues, but i love it