ADAM

No honor man ripping justice's pride
Walking on Devil's side
Without feeling of simphaty
Scream of fear like simphony

Sound of screaming in his ears
Overwhelmed by joy when hears
In his cold heart
You can see the dark
Unnamed evilness reveals
Heaven's door seals
If you want to follow
Your soul he will swallow

Once man was good
Till ate forbidden food
Got punishment of God
For price of being bad

Sound of screaming in his ears
Overwhelmed by joy he hears
In his cold heart
You can see the dark
Unnamed evilness reveals
Heaven's door seals
If you want to follow
Your soul he will swallow

Pay for your evil that you've done
I haven't told you to take some
Pray for forgivness to save your kind
Sorrow, remorse in your mind

Sound of screaming in his ears
Overwhelmed by joy he hears
In his cold heart
You can see the dark
Unnamed evilness reveals
Heaven's door seals
If you want to follow
Your soul he will swallow

Life like hell, it's the same
For better things you'll always aim
Apologize not enough
Sin commited like steel though

really well done. Exellent use of rythm and poetic language. Criticism? some minor flaws in the wording, nothing big. overall? 8/10