look what i've got

i wrote this after getting myself onto a bit of debt

CREDITS DUE
easy term repayments
Overdrafts and statements
Mortgages sky high for you to pay
Interest rate conditions
Gold cards on a mission
Money won’t be seen stood in your way

All your neighbours must be beat
Choose your weapons on receipt
Bottoms up ching, ching the battle’s underway
There’s no time to stop and think
You can swim you’ll never sink
Tomorrow never comes live for today

Welcome to the real world credits due
Designer gear and fun times debit you
The way you live the car you drive
The road you’re on is a duck and dive
The paper trail’s both long and wide
What are you gonna do now

You’re in too deep above your head
Your blackened name’s addressed in red
Remember your head teacher said
You can’t live a Champagne lifestyle
On lemonade wages

Welcome to the real world credits due
The plastic guinea’s gone the bank is you
The chips are down the house has won
The debt you’re in weighs half a ton
There’s nowhere left for you to run
What are you gonna do now

You’re in too deep above your head
You’re blackened name’s addressed in red
Remember your head teacher said
You can’t live a Champagne lifestyle
On lemonade wages

Hi there! That's a theme for a song that you don't come across often! I find those lyrics to be really good! They clearly state what the song is abut! It gives off a clear message and has great imagery within it as well! It also shws more of the truth of debt than other songs! I like it!

thanks spud yeh i have expierienced debt myself and know how easy it is to get in it and i know people who think its not a problem who seem to thrive on it i think its a road to nowhere

You're welcome, nope it's not a good thing to get into! Glad to hear you've learned that it's a road to nowhere and that you're not naive! Nice job on the lyrics!