If You Would

I'm looking to the stars tonight
Wondering where you are
Wanting you to hold me tight
Just like you used to do
Wanting you to kiss my lips
And tell me not to be blue
Whisper in my ear and tell me
Things will be alright

If you would give me one more day
I'd spend it all with you
If you would give me one more chance
I'd show you we're not through
If you would tell that you love me
I'd tell you I love you too
But my actions speak louder than my words
and baby you know it's true


Geneva Patterson
Copyright ©2007 Geneva R Patterson

Hi there! Those are very good! The theme behind it is very clear as is the point that you are putting across! I can't fault it, but that's my opinion

thank you this i wrote about 10 years ago over my high school sweetheart.

I'm looking to the stars tonight
Wondering where you are
Wanting you to hold me tight
Just like you used to do
Wanting you to kiss my lips
And tell me not to be blue
Whisper in my ear and tell me
Things will be alright

I cant just snuff out the fire in my heart
It’s not a flicker it’s blazing its hot
I cant just put off a switch
Dim it down when I wish
I cant just snuff out the fire in my heart


If you would give me one more day
I'd spend it all with you
If you would give me one more chance
I'd show you we're not through
If you would tell that you love me
I'd tell you I love you too
But my actions speak louder than my words
and baby you know it's true

I cant just snuff out the fire in my heart
It’s not a flicker it’s blazing its hot
I cant just put off a switch
Dim it down when I wish
I cant just snuff out the fire in my heart