I'm Sorry I Was Wrong

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  1. yourlifestorywales said:

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    Your Life Story "I’m Sorry I Was Wrong" Lyrics


    I’m not sure if I want to find out
    What his lips taste like locked onto yours
    I hope it’s not as nice as the stars
    Are looking tonight in the open sky
    I don’t want the hurt anymore
    Or live with a light that’s burned out tonight
    I don’t want to wake up sore
    Or spend my moments alone again

    It’s too late, you’re not mine anymore
    And I hope you’re happy
    Cause I know that he loves you more
    And the smiles you gave me
    Have more words to speak than you would know
    They brought light to my face
    Which was burned out by him next door

    I’m not sure I want these photographs
    I’m not sure I want to carry on
    Cause the images of you and him
    Erase us from our song
    And I’m finding it so hard
    But I’ll try to move along
    Just know this wasn’t meant to be
    I’m sorry I was wrong

    It’s too late, you’re not mine anymore
    And I hope you’re happy
    Cause I know that he loves you more
    And the smiles you gave me
    Have more words to speak than you would know
    They brought light to my face
    Which was burned out by him next door

    And I’m sitting here alone
    The mountains echo my glare
    But it wasn’t you, it wasn’t you
    I thought I’d have to share

    I’m not sure I want these photographs
    I’m not sure I want to carry on
    Cause the images of you and him
    Erase us from our song
    And I’m finding it so hard
    But I’ll try to move along
    Just know this wasn’t meant to be

    “I’m sorry I was wrong”

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    SpudMunky said:

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    Hi again, again the lyrics that you have written here are very well done! Very beautifully written, I don't think you've written anything yet so far that has been bad! These are again very heartfelt, but also seem very personal, but the people to be the listeners, or as they currently are at the moment, the readers, they can identify and feel the emotion themselves because it's all so vividly written!
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  3. yourlifestorywales said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by SpudMunky View Post
    Hi again, again the lyrics that you have written here are very well done! Very beautifully written, I don't think you've written anything yet so far that has been bad! These are again very heartfelt, but also seem very personal, but the people to be the listeners, or as they currently are at the moment, the readers, they can identify and feel the emotion themselves because it's all so vividly written!
    Thanks, haha i like to write in first person, i don't know why, that's where the personal touch comes in but it is not from my own experiences. Just my style of writing I suppose. Thanks for your good words. SAM
     
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    Hi! You are more than welcome! Ah that explains it then! Well this style of writing clearly works for you and makes it more accessible to listeners/readers, which is also what makes it so good! You've clearly found your style of writing and it is very good! Well done!
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    Very good =) I wish I could write lyrics like that! Lol. I never like mine. They take like 5 seconds to write.