this song was made incomplete by one of my bandmate so i fill in the blank for him and also re-adjust it too. it was his thought of the goverment lol

Apocalypse


The whole world is crashing down
Endless mourning has been drown
Cuts by the razors and the Blank stares from the dead

With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
While the devil possess and eat away with your soul
Step back before you’ll be the next one to die
A hell where the fiends crawl, and the heat was foul
Darkness with gateway lead to the land of horror
The rule to survive is to deliver the terrors

Is this not what you have come to see?
The bombs that has set the demon free
The payments to the devil’s fee is by blood

With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
While the devil possess and eat away with your soul
Step back before you’ll be the next one to die
A hell where the fiends crawl, and the heat was foul
Darkness with gateway lead to the land of horror
The rule to survive is to deliver the terrors

The crack of dawn brings nothing but pain and sorrow
Till the night of this day, the feeling is shallow

Make a contact with the undead symbolized Death and Hatred
There no replacement for those that have been lost

With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
While the devil possess and eat away with your soul
Step back before you’ll be the next one to die
A hell where the fiends crawl, and the heat was foul
Darkness with gateway lead to the land of horror
The rule to survive is to deliver the terrors

Not bad, not bad at all.
Well, I like it anyways. Very emo but hey it's good :P

Emo????? O.o but I don't like emo...It's hurt my ears lol

-patpat-
Hey, think you can rate some of my songs? >.>
Or something....... >.>
Well.
Whatever yooooooooooooooou wanna call it.
Lol it's good though.

With the slip of tongue and a throat that has slit, the dead tells no lies
^^^^^
that line is really great.

the whole thing flowed really well, but I didn't like the two opening lines all that much, other than that it was a pretty good job.

well I believe it's need a bit of work but i gotta thank my drum boy lol