Hi,
this is my second (and the fastest: 2hours) song I wrote and I think it's quite okay.
I'm not english, so I don't know if anything is wrong. Please correct me if there are mistakes.

Thanks =)


[CHORUS]:
Everytime
I stand in front
of that golden lettered door
The strong wall
I've built up
all of a sudden crashes down.
And I kneel down
in pain of the memories
that crash with the wall
I built up after
leaving my precious godsend.

[VERSE 1a]:
My precious friend,
all the time
I was carried away
with the fact You were there for me.
You know I was glad
to have met you at last
Cuz' no nobody else
could see through me like You could.

[BRIDGE 1]
but you know,
it got hard for me
to stand your differentness.

[VERSE 1b]
I tried so hard
to do the right thing.
I thought I could be
the same friend you were for me.

[BRIDGE 2]
But in the end
My weak heart
couldn't stand it anymore

so I ran away from you.

and everytime
I stand in front
of that golden lettered door
The strong wall
I've built up
all of a sudden crashes down.
and...
[CHORUS]

And everyday
I see your face
in every picture, person, thing
and I regret
not having never said
a proper farewell to my friend.

Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! Also your English is also very good, there are just a couple of things that need changing, 'to stand your differentness.' The word that you want at the end is differences, that fits better, also where you have put 'not having never said' I would change it to, not having ever said, it makes a bit more sense There's also one line that I would just add into so that it flows a bit better and that's the line that goes 'in every picture, person, thing' I would change that to in every picture, in every person, in every thing! But otherwise I really like those lyrics and as I said before your English is very good! Very well done!