Beautiful Girl

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  1. GlennB. said:

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    everytime i come around you get that sexy look on your face (on your face)
    you're the type of girl that no one could ever replace (ever replace)
    pretty face, sexy thang, something no one could ever change (ever change)
    now i'm losssssstttt....
    in your eeyyyess

    (hook)
    now i cant lie
    that everytime
    i come around you i get butterflies
    could it beeee your face
    or that perrrfect waist
    now i cant lie
    that everytime
    i come around you i get butterflies
    could it be your faaaaaaace
    or your waiiiiiiist

    Now you're lookin at me, and im lookin at you
    the vision of us could it be so true (soooo truee)
    every single time i come around you (come around you)
    my words gets lost and i dont know what to do
    baby giiiiirlll..
    i want you to be my worrrrrrlllld..

    (hook)

    (bridge)
    how could i ever get you right here next to me? (next to me)
    i could serenade you with my song or jus buy u a drink (buy u a driiiink)
    you're beautiful face, sleek slim waist
    i dont know what to say cause they're drivin me insane
    now giiiiirlll..could i just get your naaaaaaammme..

    (extra verse)
    now she's noticin me from across the room
    this is my chance to make a move
    i slide right over and i take a seat
    i introduce myself.. Hi my name is Glenn B.
    laughin and talkin is what we got goin onnnnn (going onnn)
    i hope this moment lasts all night long..
    NOW..

    (hook #2)
    you're smilin at me and i'm smilin at you
    gettin lost in your eyes is what im goin through
    you're beautiful face and your so soft skin
    let me ask you whats your name girlfriend?!
    cauuseee i...
    finally met someone riiiiiighttt..

    baby girl....
    Last edited by GlennB.; 08-19-2007 at 03:44 PM.
     
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    SpudMunky said:

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    Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! The only thing I would say is that you may want the word serenade, rather than seranate. But otherwise I think that those lyrics are really good, and depending upon the tune, could become a big song, played everywhere!
    Do you serve a purpose or purposely serve?
     
  3. GlennB. said:

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    thanks!! oh and i changed the word haha..

    i dont really take too much time in writing my songs..i basically hear a tune, or another song that i really like and then when i write something..its either a true experience or something that i'm going through.

    but thanks for the reply!
     
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    SpudMunky said:

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    Lol! You're welcome! Thats good then! That style of writing tends to turn out better than something that is planned and really thought about, also it makes it available to a wider audience! I like it!
    Do you serve a purpose or purposely serve?
     
  5. Glokus said:

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    You`ve helped me a lot: My friend has some problems with his girlfriend. He can use your lyrics idea and describe it in his own words.
     
  6. Glokus said:

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    can`t he? - write me...