Look up and Live.

She wrote to Him, in language of an ancient breed
(One only He could understand)
But not eerie, it is quite simple really
Do not fake what you cannot.

Pending on the decision, one to give another chance
Should I write back (or not) will take more than a dance
Consider every aspect, as you didst to I
Imagine my carcass, from self-matricide.

Embracing the knife for your Perverted Queen
I’ll take my own life, oh if that’s what it needs.
Voice to the damned, for my Christian faith
A message construed with such domination and grace.

(Chorus)

Show something privy, and bathe next of kin
Step on my line of falter, for Medusa Queen of sin
Be grateful for what you have, Live today as if it was your last
(Live for today or die), Don’t be living the past.

The sliced flesh and deep-red, Looks quite good on my veins
Already spilled out, is the result of my rage.
I indulge it all, A message from all the way
Near hit dusk, this one is from the grave.

I’ll take to the grave, for my Lifeless Queen
Just to prove my faith, oh if that’s what it needs.
Reduced to ruins, My grave I broke down
Dressed with poise, in a black funeral gown.

Live for today or die.

I’ll make no sense as I write to you,
Sitting in the Chapel
And we’ll try something new.
For Christ and my strewn,
Blood all over the room
(You did this)
I made you up.
Gabrielle.
Look up and live.

(Chorus)

Touch something privy, and bathe me with sin
Bear the blood of Father, God won’t let me in
He is all you have, Live today as if it was your last
(Live for today or die), Don’t keep living His past.

Live for today or die.


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I am only 14. I live in Australia. Can you please tell me what you think.

The words are ok but I think you're doing too much lyrically, there's too much going on.


you're trying to tell a story whilst asking loads of questions in it, try simpler stuff as well.