My Song

This is one of my first songs Please comments

Disagreeing

People are shouting out some words
But they don’t even know what they mean
They trying to make a fool of me
Just because I disagree.

I´m disagreeing with everything
Just shout your mouth and let me speak
I don´t need your selfish meaning
About who I am and what am I doing.

Why are you telling me this shi*
I´m so confused of what to think
What´s you’re thinking about me
And why do you hate me.

I´m disagreeing with everything
Just shout your mouth and let me speak
I´m disagreeing with everything
That seems like a lie to me.

I don´t even care of what you think
Cause you are thinking like a bitc*
And I will always disagree
I have my own reality

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personally, i find this song lacking that somthing with tweeking and maybe the real understanding of words your using

i take you mean

"People are shouting out some words
But they don’t even know what they mean
They trying to make a 'full' of me
Just because I disagree."

Fool instead of Full?

but that don't mean you have somthing just needs to get out the same rutine of the plain songs that go no-where speck which is Verse - Chorus - verse (bridge) -break -Chorus (multiple Chorus) and fade.

just my opinion and advice good luck.

Thx for your advice I´m goanna try to fix that.
But you must know thats my 2nd song that i wrote and I´m a Serb but I´m living in germany I´m speaking 5 languages and sometimes I just don´t see some failures and must think back what some words are meaning

cool..i love it.....i guess his ine

ohhh thx but what do you mean with i guess his ine