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  1. GlennB. said:

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    everytime i try to forget about you my heart keeps you comin back
    baby thats a fact..
    never wanted to end things this way but suddenly u were gone
    just tell me what i did wrong..
    girl, you knew you were the one i wanted for my life
    and to make you my wife
    but things didn't end up how they were suppose to
    girl, i feel so lost with out
    now tell me..

    (chorus)
    why'd you have to go?
    and leave me all alone
    girl, just come back home
    why'd you have to leave?
    was it all because of me
    baby girl just please tell me

    everytime i think about you i go into a daze
    girl, im goin insane...
    memories of you and me cloud my mind like a storm
    girl, my heart is torn..
    i wanted you with me for all eternity
    baby just you and me..
    but those days are gone now and i gotta deal with
    the reality of losing you
    tell me what to do..

    (chorus)
    why'd you have to go?
    and leave me all alone
    girl, just come back home
    why'd you have to leave?
    was it all because of me
    baby girl just please tell me

    (bridge)
    i want you and you know that baby
    cause right now im goin crazy
    my mind ain't thinkin straight now that youre gonnne..
    visions of us together is what was in my mind
    baby just give me the time
    cause my MIND ain't thinkin straight
    girl just come back this way
    i need you in my life...day after dayyyyyy!!!

    (chorus 4x)
     
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    Luvya said:

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    Don't take it personally but...you should give up on this standard-rhymes-that-everyone-has-already-used-ten-times. i mean...life-wife, to-you etc. and the rhymes-that-are-no-real-rhymes like baby-crazy, mind-time, gone-wrong etc. better write one song less but work it out better. it's not about mass production
    i like the idea of this song though. you're writing a lot about ex-girlfriends...hope you're not really going through this atm
     
  3. GlennB. said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Luvya View Post
    Don't take it personally but...you should give up on this standard-rhymes-that-everyone-has-already-used-ten-times. i mean...life-wife, to-you etc. and the rhymes-that-are-no-real-rhymes like baby-crazy, mind-time, gone-wrong etc. better write one song less but work it out better. it's not about mass production
    i like the idea of this song though. you're writing a lot about ex-girlfriends...hope you're not really going through this atm
    i understand what you mean. about the ex-girlfriend situation. to be honest yea i am going through it. it sucks, me nd her still talk...i dont know. hard to explain in such short terms.