angels of the sea

ok so... i think i wrote this song around a month ago.

I'm really looking for comments and suggestions on my song

i have had people tell me that the la's in the song are too repetitive,but once they usually hear it they say it sounds fine with the music.

here's the link

http://www.authspot.com/Lyrics/Angels-of-the-Sea.54113

meh 4/10