i dont have a name for it yet but plz read it

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  1. spiritgirl25 said:

    Question i dont have a name for it yet but plz read it

    i am not done with it yet if you can help me with the lyrics a little bit but heres what i have so far

    every day i see you
    every day your with her
    every day my heart breaks
    and every day i ask why
    (chorus)
    why did you do this to me
    why did i think you cared
    why did you have to leave so soon
    why did you have to walk away
    when you left me there
    (end of chorus)
    every day my heart finds empty space
    every now and then i see your face
    after that day you left with her
    i ask why
    (chorus)
    why dont you explain to me
    how i can go on from here
    how could you bring to an end
    the endless life we shared
    (chorus)
    so please tell me what you think of it and please help me out with the lyrics
    Last edited by spiritgirl25; 11-08-2007 at 03:51 PM. Reason: adding lyrics
     
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    Restoration said:

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    put a verse to this if you can so i can see where you are goin with this...
    so far though...it has potential!! get a verse to it for review!
     
  3. majacks said:

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    hey i thing there really but just
    why dont you explain to me
    how i can get on from here
    dont get it but otherwize your going to end up in a recording studio
    i think you should call it

    somthing like

    why did you do this to me