RakkauS Lyrics - Looking for Feedback!

Thread: RakkauS Lyrics - Looking for Feedback!

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  1. RakkauS said:

    Default RakkauS Lyrics - Looking for Feedback!

    hey there. some of my friends recently pursuaded me to put some of the lyrics that i write online, so i thought i might as well see what other people think of them. would be cool if you head over to my brand-new site and check them out:

    www.rakkaus.de.ms

    feedback of any kind is much appreciated, no matter if it's praise, encouragement, ideas, criticism or whatever! it would be sweet if you could leave a note in the guestbook though, it's so empty and bare at the moment, lol...

    most of the lyrics aren't in use by anyone at the moment by the way, so if you're part of a band and want to use them, just leave me your mail in the guestbook and we can probably work something out. within a certain span of subjects, i could also write lyrics upon demand.

    anyways, enough talk! please do check out the lyrics on my site. here's an example to give you an idea of what awaits you though:

    (...)
    Flames now roaring high
    Burning thorns and ruins alike
    Lust for sin and thirst for love
    Pihi rising Phoenix-like
    Soaring past the Fallen One
    Ever further
    Ever on
    Flying free at last

    Dead poet
    Heading for the place
    That he once called home
    No longer there
    Nor anywhere
    But no longer alone
    The quill he lost
    Alive again
    For He now writes the Song
    That deep within the poet’s heart
    He’d written for so long

    A new Beginning.
     

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