Beginner in need of advice

I haven't been writing for that long, so any comments and/or criticism is welcome!

Here it goes...


:Old Enough:

You’ve been just out of reach
For longer then you know
My fingertips may have grazed your love
But it’s just too hard to tell
You could never had noticed
As much as I wanted you to
Just a glance is all I asked

I am old, I am older
Then I seem to be
I am old, I am older
I am old, old
Enough to know
So much better
I swear
It just doesn’t show

Well just look at me
A modern day Eponine
You whispered warnings in my ear
And my heart threw them aside
I could stretch out my finger tips
Just a little further for forever
But I’d still be on my own

I am old, I am older
Then I seem to be
I am old, I am older
I am old, old
Enough to know
So much better
I swear
It just doesn’t show

I close my mouth to scream
Don’t let me go
Please, oh please don’t let me go
But deep down I know
I don’t have a choice
I don’t even have a chance
I told myself not fall this year

I am old, I am older
Then I seem to be
I am old, I am older
I am old, old
Enough to know
So much better
I swear
It just doesn’t show



But it’s not my fault you make me smile

i like this a lot, it flows really well, and i can relate haha
you definitely have a talent for writing!