Review Please

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  1. fighttest89 said:

    Default Review Please

    cool wind on water
    chasing waves in winter
    and echoing endlessly
    in the misty morning haze

    waves lift and linger
    rolling lost and landing
    when at last they reach the sand
    the ocean pulls them back

    the sand on the shore
    moving silently and softly
    stretches to water’s edge
    and gives in to the sea

    i am the wind on the ocean
    and the waves on the sea
    and the sand on water’s edge
    remember how I tried…

    Comments, questions, and critiques are welcome and appreciatted!
     

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