Un-Determinded Minds ----opinons please

Hesitation, makes me
Start to question, the
Way that you make me feel inside/
Some days I
Need to find a, way to
Rise above it, then we
Start the process, over
Again and again,
I see it happen again

And I, Im sorry for the way it went
Sorry for the hours spent, letting you inside,
Never had had the will to say,
Im sick and tired of the all games
But, in your head your, always right

Mock confusion, adds to
The illusion, that we
Ever had, a real
Chance in hell to make it through.
Looking back upon it,
I figure, whats the use,
No way we coulda stopped it
Start the process, over
Again and again,
I see it happen again

And I, Im sorry for the way it went
Sorry for the hours spent, letting you inside,
Never had had the will to say,
Im sick and tired of the all games
But, in your head your, always right

Now it seems, your dreams have,
Left without you and I,
Need to tell you, that
You got what you gave,
And now just,start the process, over
Again and again,
I see it happen again



let me know what you think, positive and negative feedback welcome

Not bad... Rhymes well

yes its OK. You might have to improve your English a little.