Lyrics I wrote tell me what you think.

Hey this was originally A poem I wrote a long time ago, so It might not translate to Lyrics, musically too well, but tell me what you think.



The darkness is closing in...
What the hell have you done to me?
I lie awake contemplating my sin
I can only feel torment and agony

I find myself screaming
but at whom? at you?
Seeing my hand shaking
I realize my hatred for myself is anew

Don't let this be
Another dream of agony
All my fears
Mixed with all these tears
Don't tell me it will be all right
Just let it be a bloodless night

seeing another sleepless night I leave my den
vivid images of both love and hate
Visions of us kissing again and again and again
Fantasies of my arrival at hell's gate

I stumble to ground
clutching the carpet I say a prayer
"Please take me from this world without a sound,
Remove these haunting images of her!"

Don't let this be
Another dream of agony
All my fears
Mixed with all these tears
Don't tell me it will be all right
Just let it be a bloodless night

But all there is, is silence
All I feel is my beating heart
You only live once I said
The body is only the soul's rampart

I grab my blessed knife
and plan to begin the wounding
But as the cursed steel aproaches my wrist to take my life,
I hear the phone ring

I see its you
You tell I'm your delight
But your words fill me with spite
Hell, I can live with death for at least one more night

Don't let this be
Another dream of agony
All my fears
Mixed with all these tears
Don't tell me it will be all right
Just let it be a bloodless night

Let it be a bloodless night...


Rushing to the door
Bleeding on the floor
Rapping on the door
Calling you a *****
POUNDING ON THE DOOR!!!
RUINING DECOR!!!!
CRASHING THROUGH THE DOOR!
DYING ON THE FLOOR!!!!

was I so wrong
could life be that long
was I that strange
could you change

well it doesn't matter now

Don't think that I can't see those of you who viewed but didn't post O.o lol jk. But Seriously leave some comments...

Those aren't that bad dude, well written, concise, understandbale...


I hear it being played like "Going Under"by Evanessance