Not too sure bout this one, but let me no what you think. Thanks


come,
come with me,
enter the darkness,
no more pain - no more stress,
nothing to see,
nothing to hear,
nothing to love,
nothing to fear,


follow,
follow me,
into the darkness
nothing special here - nuthin to see
wut is real,
wut is myth,
all those ideas,
we part with,

so come,
follow me,
in the land - where we are free,
nothing here,
nothing there,
just nothing everywere

wow... its really good. what style wud u sing it as though? it sounds rock or even metal? when u write more songs let me know..

im not too sure what style, metal could work but i was kinda thinkin sumthin like The Doors

and i have 2 other songs on here, if you wanna look at those too, thanks for the reply

well it's look like Rap, but does such a dark song ever compatible to rap? well if anyone know here such a guy sing one, tell me about it and I'll listen to it ^^

Originally Posted by OmegaAlienLR

im not too sure what style, metal could work

No it wouldn't, unless it was glam metal like Twisted Sister


Check out 'Burn In Hell' for an example:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=8wh2ZpjtKnU
(Video of the Hades Rollercoaster at Wisconsen Dells using 'Burn In Hell as the soundtrack)

ZOMG!! awesome song.