So this is my first song... tell me what you think. Be brutal.

“Remember”

You want to break down
You want it all to stop
Faces pass, strangers all
With no love for you

But just when you feel
Totally lost, remember
I AM HERE FOR YOU!
(All) WE ARE HERE FOR YOU!

You cry out,
Saying “I am alone”
You cry out,
Saying “There is no hope”

But you fail…
To…
Remember!
REMEMBER!

You say “Take the pain away”
You say “I will end the pain tonight”
You claim that the world asks too much
You are breaking, breaking under the weight

But just when you feel
Totally lost, remember
(back-up) [I! WE!]
REMEMBER!
(back-up) [I! WE!]
(all) ARE HERE FOR YOU!