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I've tried to translate this song by my self I'll be happy if you can correct me ?

3enaya bet7ebak

3enaya/ my eyes
Bet7ebak/

w/ and
alby/ my heart
bey7ebak
7odny
beydommak
da
yeb2a
eih/ what

ma3aya/ with me
wa7eshny/ i miss you
be3eed
betew7ashny
7abiby/ my love
tab
2oully/ tell me

ya3ny eih/ yani what
lamma/ when
kalamy/ my talk
kollo
yeb2a
fe/ in, about
seertak
ab2a
3ayesh
mosh
shayef
gheer
sortak
la2/ no, not
sooty/ my voice
mayenta2sh
ella
esmak/ your name

kol/ every
amma
aroo7
makan/ place
ashoufak/ I see you
ganby/ next to me
7obbak/ your love
wakhedly/ stole my
alby/ my heart
ro7y/ my soul
3a2ly/ mind
la2
w 3omry
ma ala2y
nafsy
ella
wenta
fe/ in
7odny/ my arms

3enaya bet7ebak

3enaya/ my eyes
Bet7ebak/

w/ and
alby/ my heart
bey7ebak/ loves you
7odny/ my hug
beydommak/ brings you closer
da/ that
yeb2a/ is it
eih/ what

ma3aya/ with me
wa7eshny/ i miss you
be3eed/ far away
betew7ashny/ I miss you
7abiby/ my love
tab/ how about
2oully/ tell me

ya3ny eih/ what does it mean
lamma/ when
kalamy/ my talk
kollo/ all
yeb2a/ is
fe/ in, about
seertak/ about you
ab2a/ I will be
3ayesh/ living
mosh/ not
shayef/ seeing
gheer/ but
sortak/ your picture
la2/ no, not
sooty/ my voice
mayenta2sh/ does say
ella/ except
esmak/ your name

kol/ every time
amma/ I
aroo7/ go
makan/ place
ashoufak/ I see you
ganby/ next to me
7obbak/ your love
wakhedly/ stole my
alby/ my heart
ro7y/ my soul
3a2ly/ mind
la2/ no
w 3omry/ and my life
ma ala2y/ don't find
nafsy/ myself
ella/ except
wenta/ and you
fe/ in
7odny/ my arms

thank you soo much

Can someone correct me ??

Ergaali/ come back to me
7abibi/ my darling
ana 2albe/ my heart
waje3ni enta
3amel
fiya
enta/ you
sa7erni
wala eih/ or what
Ma
kol/ every time
il
nas
bite2dar
tensa/ to forget
tensa/ to forget
tayeb
ana mosh ader/ I cant
2ansak/ forget you
leh/ why
ma3ak/ with you
mosh 2ader/ i cant
2ansa/ forget
hawak/ your love
ya a7la
malak/ angel
ya rou7 ilrou7/ soul of my soul
3andi
2amal
koli
amal
ashoufak
tani/ again
f7odni/ in my arms
Eh
il
3amal
khodi
Ana ta3ban
men
gherak
2isma3ni
Wa
Radi
Damirak
Law
3adi
Tsebni
Lighirak
Ana/
Walla/ wallah swear
Amout/
Dana
Saket
7ata3mel
Eih/ what
Shoft
7asali
3ashanak
fara7ni
fi 3omri
Fel
iyam
layalina
wal
far7a
yali
fi 3inina
Lama/ when
Menkoun
liwa7dina
w daybin
fi gharam

here you go

Originally Posted by LaaSemaa

Can someone correct me ??

Ergaali/ come back to me
7abibi/ my darling
ana 2albe/ my heart
waje3ni enta /is aching me you
3amel /are doing
fiya /(it's "in me" but in the context it should be "to me")
enta/ you
sa7erni/charming me
wala eih/ or what(exellent!)
Ma/(it has no meaning actually it is used to express a fact)
kol/ every time(no ,kol means only "every or all ")
il
nas(it's actualy il nas=the people)/all the people
bite2dar/can
tensa/ to forget (forget)
tensa/ to forget(forget)
tayeb(ok)
ana mosh ader/ I can't (good!)
2ansak/ forget you(true)
leh/ why
why can't i forget you?
ma3ak/ with you
mosh 2ader/ i can't
2ansa/ forget
hawak/ your love
ya a7la/(ya is used to call someone)a7la the most beatiful(superlative)
malak/ angel
ya rou7 ilrou7/ soul of my soul(true)
3andi/i have
2amal/hope
koli /i'm all
amal/hope
koli amal(i'm full of hope)
ashoufak/to see you
tani/ again
f7odni/ in my arms
Eh/what
il/the
3amal/deed
eh el 3amal/what to do?
khodi/take
Ana ta3ban/i'm tired
men
gherak
men gherak/without you
2isma3ni /listen to me
Wa/and
Radi/satisfy
Damirak/your conscience
Law/if
3adi/normal
Tsebni/you leave me
if it's normal for you to leave me
Lighirak/to someone but you
Ana/ i
Walla/ wallah swear
Amout/i die
Dana/ana/i
Saket/quite/not talking
7ata3mel/you will do
Eih/ what
Shoft/did you see
7asali/what happened
3ashanak/because of you
fara7ni/make me happy
fi 3omri/in my life
Fel/in
iyam /the days
layalina/our nights
wal/and
far7a/the joy
yali/that is
fi 3inina/in our eyes
Lama/ when
Menkoun/we are being
liwa7dina/alone
w daybin/and melting
fi gharam/in the passion

thank you Larosa so much

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