Suffering

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  1. Gleabs's Avatar

    Gleabs said:

    Default Suffering

    Criticize as much as you can.

    [Verse 1:]
    I feel pain inside of my heart
    Pain that's tearing me apart
    I feel as if a dead hand is squeezing my heart
    Ripping through the flesh with its sharp claws
    Pouring all my emotions from the cuts in my clock
    Leaving me cold, bloodthirsty for revenge
    I must avenge your death

    [Chorus:]
    You suffered in front of me
    I cried with you
    I screamed with you
    I tried to save you
    But I was bonded by iron chains
    I WISH IT WAS ME INSTEAD
    My heart is full of dread
    I WISH IT WAS ME INSTEAD

    [Verse 2:]
    There's a lump in my throat
    blocking out all the air
    The pain in my ribs
    Increases each time I inhale

    [Verse 3:]
    I feel as if there are a million knives
    stabbing my chest and heart
    Throbbing,
    Ripping me apart

    I'm so stressed and so bitter inside
    I'm shaking all over
    I don’t know what to do anymore
    I just want this misery to be over

    [Verse 4:]
    Your voice is still ringing in my ears
    Your screams, your cries, the pain I saw inside your eyes
    Your memory leaves me cold, bloodthirsty for revenge
    I must avenge your death

    [Chorus:]
    You suffered in front of me
    I cried with you
    I screamed with you
    I tried to save you
    But I was bonded by iron chains
    Holding me down
    I WISH IT WAS ME INSTEAD
    My heart is full of dread
    I WISH IT WAS ME INSTEAD
    I WISH IT WAS ME INSTEAD
    The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on. - Robert Bloch
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  2. Jean1singer said:

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    Umm... it's good. A little too emo for me though, but I guess i'm just not into that kind of music.