Animal Crackers

Visions in head,
I see the world, Its red and it’s bleeding.
Cant you see evil is seeding?
And on your souls it is feeding?

Dillusions in my brain,
Its such a drain of my time.
Look closer, what do you find?
Its all in a bind

Hello there, come on in.
F*ck the world, for tha win
Don’t you see all of the sin?
Its overflowing, suffocating me.

See that empty corner over there
C’mon in I don’t mind
I’ll be real kind
Just please make some room in my mind

Take a tour
See the sights
Don’t you see the battles and all the fights
The place where its always night
My only retreat


Behind the lies and deceit
You’ll find that this place is quite neat
Crazy thoughts flow through my head
On the border of tragedy and insanity
Why wont you save me
I need some help here please


Visions in head,
I see the world, Its red and it’s bleeding.
Cant you see evil is seeding?
And on your souls it is feeding?

Take a tour
See the sights
Don’t you see the battles and all the fights
The place where its always night
My only retreat
My only retreat

can i get some opinions please?

They're ok...

I'd leave out the rhyming every line of a verse but then my style of lyrics are the "direct-message-to-someone-or-something" type...