Hey guys just wrote these last night. Its only about half a song. Would love some feedback. Thanks

You're a dead bet, she said,
I said, I know this,
But baby we can make it now,
We can make it now.

She laughed and said,
Boy whats runnin through your head,
I've made that bet before,
And lost every single time

Girl just roll the dice,
One last time
And maybe you’ll be surprised to find,
That your luck is changin
Cause everything is comin up aces
Cause everything is comin up aces