Please Help Me Translate My Poem "Tell Me You Will, Trust Me Still"

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  1. threejays31 said:

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    Please Help Me Translate My Poem "Tell Me You Will, Trust Me Still" into Spanish. Please? Thanks.


    - Tell Me You Will, Trust Me Still -


    Tell me you will

    Trust me still

    I sometimes understand how you feel

    But mostly, i just stand still

    And never really knew when you're ill

    I know the times you're angry with me

    I know you're sick and tired of me

    thought of getting rid of me

    You also wanna get even with me

    but damn, i don't know the times when you need company

    Your totally fed up with all my apology

    almost in damnshit with all my sorry

    i don't know really well how to make you happy

    I don't know really well, i feel i'm just being funny

    what i only knew, i always make you worry

    But believe me, dear

    the pain you feel is the same pain i can't bear

    believe me not

    i treasure you a lot

    tell you wont leave and just stay

    i plead to God thats what i pray

    Dear, i regret the moments i made you mad

    truly, i am dying when you're sad

    my heart is aching everytime you cry and feel hate

    just stab me with a knife

    ill welcome my faith

    but please give me your sweetest smile before i face death

    I better die this early

    than see you dull, oh terribly

    i better not exist

    than to know, in my life you'll perish

    I know times i break promises

    i always have too many excuses

    Give me, i'm begging

    another chance, darling

    kindly please tell me you will...

    trust me still
     
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    istanbulgal said:

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    Do you write your own poetry?.

    Tell Me You Will, Trust Me Still - Díme que aún confiarás en mí


    **the next 2 lines is the same as above, however, in Spanish you cannot really separate them because the word "will" is attached to the verb "trust" to make it future tense, ie: you will trust = confiarás

    Tell me you will

    Trust me still

    *****

    I sometimes understand how you feel - a veces entiendo como te sientes

    But mostly, i just stand still - pero por lo general, solo me quedo quieto

    And never really knew when you're ill (should it not say "you WERE ill instead of you ARE ill" since you said earlier "never knew" and this is past tense?)

    if present tense = y realmente nunca supé cuando estas enferma
    if past tense = y realmente nunca supé cuando estabas enferma

    I know the times you're angry with me - se los momentos cuando estas enojada conmigo

    I know you're sick and tired of me - se que ya no me aguantas más

    thought of getting rid of me - el pensamiento de deshacerte de mí

    You also wanna get even with me - también deseas vengarte de mí

    but damn, i don't know the times when you need company - pero que lata, no se los tiempos cuando necesitas visita

    Your totally fed up with all my apology - estas completamente harta con mis disculpas

    almost in damn **** with all my sorry - casi con mierda con mis disculpas

    i don't know really well how to make you happy - bueno, no se realmente, como hacerte feliz

    I don't know really well, i feel i'm just being funny - bueno, no se muy bien, siento que solo soy divertido

    what i only knew, i always make you worry - lo unico que siempre supé, siempre te hago triste

    But believe me, dear - pero creeme estimada

    the pain you feel is the same pain i can't bear - el dolor que sufres es el mismo al cual no puedo soportar

    believe me not - no me creas

    i treasure you a lot - eres mi gran tesoro

    tell you wont leave and just stay - dime que no te iras y quedate

    i plead to God thats what i pray - le pido a Dios, eso es lo que le ruego

    Dear, i regret the moments i made you mad - estimada, me apena los momentos que te enoje

    truly, i am dying when you're sad - la verdad es que me muero cuando tienes pena

    my heart is aching everytime you cry and feel hate - mi corazón me duele cada vez que lloras y sientes odio

    just stab me with a knife - solamente apuñalame con un cuchillo

    ill welcome my faith - haz una bienvenida mala a mi fe

    but please give me your sweetest smile before i face death - pero por favor dame tu sonrisa más dulce antes que muera

    I better die this early - es mejor que muera temprano

    than see you dull, oh terribly - a que verte aburrida, oh terriblemente

    i better not exist - es mejor no exista

    than to know, in my life you'll perish - que a saber que en mi vida moriras

    I know times i break promises - se que a veces rompo promesas

    i always have too many excuses - siempre tengo muchas excusas

    Give me, i'm begging - dame, te ruego

    another chance, darling - otra oportunidad, querida

    kindly please tell me you will...amablemente dime que aún confiarás en mí
     
  3. threejays31 said:

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    thank you very much ... hasta la proxima ves =)
     
  4. YardeyPlatano said:

    Thumbs up

    Nice Poem, Good skiils
     
  5. threejays31 said:

    Smile

    Quote Originally Posted by istanbulgal View Post
    Do you write your own poetry?.
    yep, i wrote my own poetry, actually i made that poem the time my friend got angry with me, ehehe, thank God, we are ok now.
     
  6. threejays31 said:

    Red face

    Quote Originally Posted by YardeyPlatano View Post
    Nice Poem, Good skiils
    thank you.