Caesura Mile

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  1. sam3219 said:

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    [Intro]
    I’ve started to miss your hands
    And your eyes
    Forgotten what it’s like to hear your voice
    In my ear
    The smell of that room we used
    Reminds me of you dear
    But I can’t seem
    To spend anytime in there

    [Chorus]
    We’re young
    And I'm still hung up on you
    I know I'm young
    But you're the one
    Who made me happy

    [Verse 1]
    You can find a way to make this better
    A way to bring us home
    You could open up my heartfelt letter
    Or spend this season all alone
    Perhaps it's something I can't change
    I guess it's something no-one can
    I wish it could have finished
    The way that it began

    [Verse 2]
    I miss the times we shared together
    And all the times you smiled
    Miss the times spent in the heather
    Where we used to go and hide
    Hide from all the problems
    Shelter from the hurt
    And never did we care
    About the grass stains and the dirt

    [Chorus]
    We’re young
    And I'm still hung up on you
    I know I'm young
    But you're the one
    Who made me happy

    [Verse 3]
    I miss the nights spent laughing
    All the times I held you tight
    As we watched all of our worries
    Disappear into the night
    And I hope you feel the same
    You know - you broke my heart in two
    But I can't begin to understand
    A life without a "You"

    [Verse 4]
    I'm not sure I want these photographs
    I'm not sure I want to carry on
    'Cause the images of you and him
    Erase us from our song
    And I'm finding it so hard
    But I'll try to move along
    Just know this wasn't meant to be
    I’m sorry - I was wrong

    [Chorus]
    We’re young
    And I'm still hung up on you
    I know I'm young
    But you're the one
    Who made me happy

    [Bridge]
    But the Man in the moon
    No, He'll never understand
    He'll never get to know what love is like
    When it's unplanned
    He'll never get to feel a girl he adores in his hands
    No, the Man in the moon
    He will never understand

    [Close]
    Help me forget the things that bring me back to you
    'Cause all they do
    Is bring more hurt


    Copyright Samuel AD Evans 2008
     
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    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    I think the verses are amazing, but not sure if the chorus measures up...