An OLD lyric of mine. Puzzle Girl.

So heres a lyric that i wrote AGES ago. I think it has some merit. I like where it ended up harmonically, so I'm gonna try record it and post it.

Puzzle Girl.

Shes a puzzle that i just cant figure out,
If I could get it down she'd mean the world to me
I must have thought it over about a thousand times
And im tired of her running inside my mind

Chorus
Leave me alone,
You're not good for me,
You're only gonna waste all my time,
Maybe we could wait and try again,
If you'll let me inside,
Let me inside.

Its 3am you call me crying on the phone
It takes a while to calm you down
And I know theres no point in making clever conversation
You've already got your armor back on

Chorus

B Sec
You know the old story
Cant live without them, cant live without them
Well you're that for me.
Do me a favour
Chose one way or the other
So I can love you
Or move on to someone new.

It seems to me,
Ive done all I can to give you my hand
But you keep throwing it away
Well you're the dove caught in the thunder storm
And I'm in the plane flying away

Thoughts?? I had a real polished version somewhere but I've forgotten where I wrote it down. Nuts.

So no one has any ideas?