When sorry doesn't.. (please comment!!)

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  1. friends that kiss said:

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    Take my hand....
    let me be ur lips,
    Your like the sun in December
    You bring a smile to my face
    Your light up the streets,
    Your like love at my feet...

    But sorry wont cut it anymore,
    I'm cut beyond repair,

    Hide behind your catchy corus's
    Just like you do.
    But its lost all meaning.
    It's just a song all the pretty girls are singin.

    This is me hangin on to sumthink,
    making me choke turnin me blue
    The empty space in my bed at nite,
    This is me without you!!

    But sorry wont cut it anymore,
    I'm cut beyond repair,

    Hide behind your catchy corus's
    Just like you do.
    But its lost all meaning.
    It's just a song all the pretty girls are singin.

    But its lost all meaning.
    It's just a song all the pretty girls are singin
     
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    Jester said:

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    Lyrics = good
    Spelling = Not so good
     
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    lyricsfromtheheart said:

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    The lyrics are really good. But there doesn't seem to be enough material fro a regular 2 and a half minute song. Also your spelling is horrible. Like mine. LOL but i really like the part that goes

    But its lost all meaning.
    It's just a song all the pretty girls are singin

    because even though its so little its very meaningful to me. I reallly like this.
     
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    Jester said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by lyricsfromtheheart View Post
    The lyrics are really good. But there doesn't seem to be enough material fro a regular 2 and a half minute song.
    Most songs have music with them, this doesn't.

    Try to understand it with some sort of musical refrain and a bridge.