Another wantchaback type lyric

So I'm new.... But like everyone here, it seems, I write out my feelings from time to time... cept mine are always girl-related

anyway, I got a current situation im going through so I put this together. It's raw, unedited, one run through. Haven't even gone back and read it since I wrote it. Throw me some thoughts if it catches.

The enchanting fragrance of your neck
The loving sound of your whisper
The constant battle takes me back
The sensation of you I remember

If I had my one final wish
I would bring back a day
It would be an eternal day
It would be an eternal day

Forever with you
Just a day would be
just like eternity
Forever with you

The curb outside your window
Is used to my presence
Even lost inside my mind
I find myself locked outside

I wouldn't want to keep you
From living your new life
It's as beautiful as you
It's as beautiful as you

Forever with you
Just a day would be
just like eternity
Forever with you

And now the final step I take
Is not forgetting about your face
But remembering who you are
And then you'll never be far

There's something else you should know
But I can only say in my mind
I really do love you
I really did love you

Forever with you
Just a day would be
just like eternity
Forever with you

Forever with you
Just a day would be
just like eternity
Forever with you

Just a tip, your thread title makes everyone think 'not again!' and they won't read the lyrics. It's good, i'd like to see it after you've edited it though.