suggestions on another verse (or two)

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  1. creme of sun said:

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    When you walk into my room
    I hide my tear stained face
    Behind the mask I wear
    But you never seemed to notice
    No you never seem to notice
    The way I stare

    When I see you it just feels so right
    And I’m confident I know what to do
    Tomorrow I’ll tell you I love you
    And hopefully you’ll realize that you love me too
     
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    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    Which bit is the verse?
     
  3. creme of sun said:

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    ha sorry bout that. the first part is supposed to be the verse and the second is a chorus type deal