trying to make a song

im trying to make a song for my boyfriend in spanish can someone please translate these words for me. its for his birthday. i would greatly appreciate it!




there are things in my life that i would change if i could.
but, i would never change meeting you.
because now you are my life.
with out you i would die.
when you are not with me its like being in deep water down close to the bottom and you keep swimming up and up.
but you are not at the surface yet.
you can feel your body pulsing because you need air.
but you cant get it until you make it to the top.
the way you make me feel is like when you break through the surface of the water and you take that first gasp of air.
you fill your lungs full of air.
your heart beats more lively because you have just escaped death.
that is how i feel when i see you every day.
just like that gasp of fresh air fills the lungs.
you fill my heart and it beats faster and faster with every touch.
and with every kiss you make me feel alive!

well I did my best in this translation, if there is something wrong, please someone correct it...

shadonthalite44, good luck with your song I hope I've helped you...

there are things in my life that i would change if i could.
HAY COSAS EN MI VIDA QUE CAMBIARÍA SI PUDIERA
but, i would never change meeting you.
PERO NUNCA CAMBIARÍA EL HABERTE CONOCIDO
because now you are my life.
PORQUE AHORA TÚ ERES MI VIDA
with out you i would die.
SIN TI PODRÍA MORIR
when you are not with me its like being in deep water down close to the bottom
CUANDO TÚ NO ESTÁS CONMIGO ES COMO ESTAR SUMERGIDO EN AGUAS PROFUNDAS, CERCA DEL FONDO,
and you keep swimming up and up.
Y TÚ TRATAS DE NADAR HACIA ARRIBA
but you are not at the surface yet.
SIN LLEGAR AÚN A LA SUPERFICIE
you can feel your body pulsing because you need air.
TÚ PUEDES SENTIR TU CUERPO VIBRAR PORQUE NECESITAS AIRE
but you cant get it until you make it to the top.
PERO NO PUEDES OBTENERLO HASTA QUE LLEGUES A LA SUPERFICIE
the way you make me feel is like when you break through the surface of the
LA FORMA EN QUE ME HACES SENTIR ES COMO CUANDO UNO LLEGA A LA SUPERFICIE
water and you take that first gasp of air.
DEL AGUA Y TOMA ESA PRIMERA BOCANADA DE AIRE
you fill your lungs full of air.
LLENANDO LOS PULMONES
your heart beats more lively because you have just escaped death.
TU CORAZÓN LATE MÁS ANIMADO PORQUE HAS ESCAPADO A LA MUERTE.
that is how i feel when i see you every day.
ASÍ ES COMO ME SIENTO CUANDO TE VEO CADA DÍA.
just like that gasp of fresh air fills the lungs.
EXACTAMENTE COMO ESA BOCANADA DE AIRE FRESCO LLENANDO LOS PULMONES
you fill my heart and it beats faster and faster with every touch
TÚ LLENAS MI CORAZÓN , Y ÉSTE LATE CADA VEZ MÁS RÁPIDO CON CADA CARICIA
and with every kiss you make me feel alive!
Y CON CADA BESO ME HACES SENTIR VIVA

Good job Tucumana & awesome lyrics shadonthalite!



with out you i would die.
sin ti me moriría

and you keep swimming up and up.
y sigues nadando hacia arriba

but you are not at the surface yet.
pero todavía no llegaste a la superficie

you fill my heart and it beats faster and faster with every touch
llenas mi corazón y late más y más rápido con cada caricia

thankyou guys sooo soo much i think hes going to love it!