Tears Gone cold (comments appreciated)

Thread: Tears Gone cold (comments appreciated)

Tags: None
  1. Acheramee's Avatar

    Acheramee said:

    Default Tears Gone cold (comments appreciated)

    I wrote this one in a hurry,So it's definitely not the best it could be. it's a bout a giirl or guy talking to someone who apparently had big ideas and dreams and it was all working, but then something went wrong and he/her tell his/her main help that he/her doesn't need her/him anymore because he/she's proud and then it crumbles and all the dreams and ideas die. Hmmm, i think it was best not saying anything about it. Oh, well.

    Tears Gone Cold

    You said that you’d go through it all
    You said you’d watch while others fall
    And now it’s empty following your life
    You threw it away by your childish pride

    Cho. (Chorus)
    It’s another time of tears gone cold
    A restless feeling on your soul
    It’s another look of peace just died
    A smile when you’re ashamed to cry
    And your dreams run dry

    A chilling fear that you might live
    Your mind’s full, but there’s nothing to give
    Did you know when you ruled the world
    That you’d slip without saying a word

    Cho. It’s another time of tears gone cold
    A restless feeling on your soul
    It’s another look of peace just died
    A smile when you’re ashamed to cry
    Because your dreams ran dry

    All the things you did
    You currently regret
    You’re on your knees to beg
    That you can forget

    A fading laugh when I walked away
    A haunted vision
    And you can’t even look at your face

    Cho.
    It’s another time of tears gone cold
    A restless feeling on your soul
    It’s another look of peace just died
    A smile when you’re ashamed to cry
    All because your dreams ran dry
     

loading