All The Way With You - comments? :P

A song I wrote a while ago, kinda slow and sad one (Don't worry, its not about someone that is dead!!)
I know the bit here doesn't make much sense (it took me a very long time to find a normal bit for those)
please tell me what should I change/Improve
(I know the song isnt THAT good, but still... i'd like to hear just what I need to do to make it better)

All The Way With You

[Verse1]
Crying in the darkness, trying to see my life ahead
Going through it all again, Rehearseing every breath I take...
I see you on the other side, I'm willing to come with you now.
Just wait for me, I will go on, I'm moving all the way along!
[/Verse1]

[Chorus]
My tears are gone, I'm all alone.
Explodes inside my head.
They say i've got a heart as cold as ice, It never fades!
I'm gone inside that time, you were alive, you loved me so.
Through that I cannot go again, i'm moving from this world!
[Chorus]


[Verse2]
Remember on the day you left, you took my life as well.
From ever since that day, I let my lifestyle go astray.
I know your never coming back, your dead, I never wanted that.
Now I'll be just heading on my way!
[/Verse2]

[Chorus]
My tears are gone, I'm all alone.
Explodes inside my head.
They say i've got a heart as cold as ice, It never fades!
I'm gone inside that time, you were alive, you loved me so.
Through that I cannot go again, i'm moving from this world!
[/Chorus]

[Solo I guess]

[Verse3]
I'm going to sleep, I''ll never wake up.
Can't you see, I'm never coming back.
All I wanted was to see my love, my life again
I'm reaching to my happy end. i'm coming just for you, i'm whole again
One last time will last forever, all the way with you.
[/Verse3]


[Chorus]
My tears are gone, I'm all alone.
Explodes inside my head.
They say i've got a heart as cold as ice, It never fades!
I'm gone inside that time, you were alive, you loved me so.
Through that I cannot go again, i'm moving from this world!
[/Chorus]

[End]

I like it. :P

Cold as ice is pretty cliché. lots of clichés in fact but some things are best said a certain way i spose. Not into the slowness of it, i kinda take a fed up approach to it, with a medium pace. and whats the "it never fades", i dont understand that part... but overall theres substance just needs more creative patience i.m.o.

Ahh I get it,
the "it never fades" talks about the memories and emotions that used to have,
nows just feels empty, cold..

bah, on everything else, i'll just try to improve next time :P
thanks