Tomorrow's Sorrow - Opinions

“Tomorrow’s Sorrow”

Eyes are sparkling
People are laughing
Faces are smiling
Lives are hiding

Oh, what’s inside
Is not what’s seen
Trying to hide
What’s underneath

Where tears are falling
People are crying
Hearts are breaking
Lives are hurting

And tomorrow’s sorrow
Comes today
So we put on a show
To shadow our dismay

Where tears are falling
People are crying
Hearts are breaking
Lives are hurting

We put that twinkle in our eyes
We face the life that we despise
Trying hard not to cry
But sometimes we wonder why

Tomorrow’s sorrow
Comes today
Try to make it through another day
Try to figure out some other way

But tears are falling
People are crying
Hearts are breaking
Lives are hurting

Tomorrow’s Sorrow
(Tears are falling)
Tomorrow’s Sorrow
(People are crying)
Tomorrow’s Sorrow
(Hearts are breaking)
Tomorrow’s Sorrow
(Lives are hurting)

Tomorrow’s Sorrow
Comes today

What do you think? :-)

Wow. I could imagine singing that, Great Imagery. Good work!

Thanks! I'm trying to figure out a tune for it to go to...I was thinking it would be a slower song, but I'm really not sure. What do you think?

Slower with slight twinges of energy, especially at the 'Tommorows sorrow' bit near the end to then slow right down for the last couple of bars.

Thank you! :-)

As' okay

Oh, what’s inside
Is not what’s seen
Trying to hide
What’s underneath

We put that twinkle in our eyes
We face the life that we despise
Trying hard not to cry
But sometimes we wonder why

Here's some really good parts. the flow is really good. Great job!

Originally Posted by Acheramee

Oh, what’s inside
Is not what’s seen
Trying to hide
What’s underneath

We put that twinkle in our eyes
We face the life that we despise
Trying hard not to cry
But sometimes we wonder why

Here's some really good parts. the flow is really good. Great job!

your work is great ,who do you like to sing itI am waiting .........