this is a song i wrote about my grandfather when he passed away
let me know what you think.


(verse1)
when i close my eyes
while staring into the sky
i can still feel your hands
resting there on my shoulders

(Chorus)
I will never forget you
forever you will be in my heart
since the day you left this earth
my life seems to have changed
so i hope you will understand
i will never forget you

(verse2)
you were the only one
in my life that seemed to care
about the things i had done
and proved to me you were always there

(Chorus)
I will never forget you
forever you will be in my heart
since the day you left this earth
my life seems to have changed
so i hope you will understand
i will never forget you

(verse3)
its so hard for me to come visit you
i'd just break out in tears
i feel so alone without you here
standing by my side

(Chorus)
I will never forget you
forever you will be in my heart
since the day you left this earth
my life seems to have changed
so i hope you will understand
i will never forget you

(Subverse)
i wish i turn could
turn back the hands of time
to that day that you left me in sorrow
cause then i would
have taken back the things i said
but its to late, now i'm feeling empty instead
there is one thing i would like to say
and thats that I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU
ooooo

(Chorus)
I will never forget you
forever you will be in my heart
since the day you left this earth
my life seems to have changed
so i hope you will understand
i will never forget you

(ending)
i dont know why
its just so hard for me to come see you
you left me alone in this worl without a goodbye
you were the only one that made me feel secure
there for me when i needed you, so for that i thank you
and i want you to know, you are missed
and I will never forget you.

That's really nice. I like it. I would like to criticise but I can only really comment because your songs don't need to be criticised.

thanks.