I'm in a band and we need a song and i was wondering if anybody could write us a song and we can use it. DONT WORRY! we will definatley give u guys credit for it. we are more pop/rock ish. the sooner the better. THANKS (:
I'm in a band and we need a song and i was wondering if anybody could write us a song and we can use it. DONT WORRY! we will definatley give u guys credit for it. we are more pop/rock ish. the sooner the better. THANKS (:
Is there any specific topic you want the song to be about?
umm not really. just like fun stuff. not sadness or anything. thanks
I tried but it's not my best so it's alright if you don't like it :/
Not Naive Anymore
Chorus
Why should I be the one to change
While all you do is complain
I can’t take this crap anymore
That’s why I’m walking out the door
Baby don’t cry to me
You had your chance
Won’t fall for that trick again
v1
I tried to be the girl of your dreams
I tried to make you happy
But it just didn't work for me
I loved you so much
And you used that to your advantage
Broke my heart like a pane of glass
Yet I came running back to you
Now I know better
I'm not that naive girl anymore
Why should I be the one to change
While all you do is complain
I can't take this crap anymore
That's why I'm walking out the door
Baby don't cry to me
You had your chance
Won't fall for that trick again
v2
I'm tired of you saying I'm not good enough
I'm tired of you making feel useless
Everything I've done for you just a waste
You told me lies and called me names
Yet I came running back to you
I was so stupid back then
But I've grown stronger
I'm not that naive girl anymore
Why should I be the one to change
While all you do is complain
I can't take this crap anymore
That's why I'm walking out the door
Baby don't cry to me
You had your chance
Won't fall for that trick again
Why should I be the one to change
While all you do is complain
I can't take this crap anymore
That's why I'm walking out the door
Baby don't cry to me
You had your chance
Won't fall for that trick again
Isn't your request a bit vague? E.g. what instruments do you guys play? How old are you? If you're 15 years old a song about leaving your wife and kids wouldn't do, would it? Speaking of leaving your wife, if you're old enough but female that wouldn't do either, anyway.
You can check out my lyrics and about a dozen of my songs on my different pages like:
http://bernd-harmsen.de/
(a player is on the 'odds and ends' page)
Here is a sample (it has a melody - like most of my songs, only the lyrics I've written during the last month do NOT have melodies yet). There are a few more which could fit for younsters (just a guess, don't worry):
boring
she knows how to dress
she knows how to walk
always takes her time
for friendly small talk
she greets me each morning
God, she's so boring
she knows to behave
she's anxious to please
when required she's grave
she's smart and she's clean
she greets me each morning
God, is she boring
she is so nice
she is very kind
she always smiles
and donates to the blind
she greets me each morning
God, she's so boring
Have fun,
Bernd
Okay, are we talking pop-rock like scouting for girls or like the feeling. (Up-beat or down-beat?)
I'll have a guess though.
im sorry. it was a bit vague. we are 15 year old girls. we play electric guitar, drums, bass, and singing of course. thanks you guys. these songs are really awesome. we love them!