Can someone help me?

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  1. ohwowitsafsoon said:

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    I'm in a band and we need a song and i was wondering if anybody could write us a song and we can use it. DONT WORRY! we will definatley give u guys credit for it. we are more pop/rock ish. the sooner the better. THANKS (:
     
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    x_kissedbyanangel_x said:

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    Is there any specific topic you want the song to be about?
     
  3. ohwowitsafsoon said:

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    umm not really. just like fun stuff. not sadness or anything. thanks
     
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    x_kissedbyanangel_x said:

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    I tried but it's not my best so it's alright if you don't like it :/

    Not Naive Anymore

    Chorus
    Why should I be the one to change
    While all you do is complain
    I can’t take this crap anymore
    That’s why I’m walking out the door
    Baby don’t cry to me
    You had your chance
    Won’t fall for that trick again

    v1
    I tried to be the girl of your dreams
    I tried to make you happy
    But it just didn't work for me
    I loved you so much
    And you used that to your advantage
    Broke my heart like a pane of glass
    Yet I came running back to you
    Now I know better
    I'm not that naive girl anymore

    Why should I be the one to change
    While all you do is complain
    I can't take this crap anymore
    That's why I'm walking out the door
    Baby don't cry to me
    You had your chance
    Won't fall for that trick again

    v2
    I'm tired of you saying I'm not good enough
    I'm tired of you making feel useless
    Everything I've done for you just a waste
    You told me lies and called me names
    Yet I came running back to you
    I was so stupid back then
    But I've grown stronger
    I'm not that naive girl anymore

    Why should I be the one to change
    While all you do is complain
    I can't take this crap anymore
    That's why I'm walking out the door
    Baby don't cry to me
    You had your chance
    Won't fall for that trick again

    Why should I be the one to change
    While all you do is complain
    I can't take this crap anymore
    That's why I'm walking out the door
    Baby don't cry to me
    You had your chance
    Won't fall for that trick again
     
  5. texter-bernd said:

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    Isn't your request a bit vague? E.g. what instruments do you guys play? How old are you? If you're 15 years old a song about leaving your wife and kids wouldn't do, would it? Speaking of leaving your wife, if you're old enough but female that wouldn't do either, anyway.

    You can check out my lyrics and about a dozen of my songs on my different pages like:
    http://bernd-harmsen.de/
    (a player is on the 'odds and ends' page)

    Here is a sample (it has a melody - like most of my songs, only the lyrics I've written during the last month do NOT have melodies yet). There are a few more which could fit for younsters (just a guess, don't worry):

    boring

    she knows how to dress
    she knows how to walk
    always takes her time
    for friendly small talk

    she greets me each morning
    God, she's so boring

    she knows to behave
    she's anxious to please
    when required she's grave
    she's smart and she's clean

    she greets me each morning
    God, is she boring

    she is so nice
    she is very kind
    she always smiles
    and donates to the blind

    she greets me each morning
    God, she's so boring


    Have fun,
    Bernd
     
  6. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Okay, are we talking pop-rock like scouting for girls or like the feeling. (Up-beat or down-beat?)

    I'll have a guess though.
     
  7. ohwowitsafsoon said:

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    im sorry. it was a bit vague. we are 15 year old girls. we play electric guitar, drums, bass, and singing of course. thanks you guys. these songs are really awesome. we love them!