Animal X - corrections please

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    DeBaires said:

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    Corrections, va rog. Sunt scurte. Mersi anticipat!

    1) "In al noualea cer"
    Would the translation be "On Cloud Nine"?

    Ma privesti insistent, nu stiu ce mai astept
    You look at me insistently, I don't know what more to wait for
    Ma provoci cand dansezi, nu stiu ce sa mai cred.
    You provoke me when you dance, I no longer know what I should think(?)

    Imi pierd controlul si-as vrea
    I lose control & I'd like
    Sa fugim departe, undeva
    us to run far, anywhere
    Nu am scapare si nici n-as vrea
    I don't have an escape & I wouldn't even like (one)
    Sunt prins in plasa ta.
    I'm caught in your net

    Ma faci sa visez, doar tu
    You make me dream, only you
    In al noualea cer
    On cloud nine

    Dragostea ne va da aripi sa putem zbura
    Love is gonna give us wings so we can fly
    Numai noi vom fugi, stelele ne vor privi
    But we'll run, the stars will watch us


    2) "Pentru ea"
    "For her"

    Pentru ea, (pentru ea) as da orice
    For her, I'd give anything
    Doar sa stiu ca e din nou a mea.
    Just to know that she's, again, mine
    Pentru ea.
    for her

    Imi lipsesti atat de mult
    I miss you so much
    Nu pot sa cred, nu pot sa inteleg.
    I can't believe (it), I can't understand (it)

    Vreau decat sa ma asculti
    I want so much for you to lisent to me
    Nu pot sa stau cu gandul ca ma uitï.
    I can't stay with the thought that you forget me


    3) "N-am crezut"
    "I didn't believe"

    N-am crezut ca vei pleca din viata mea
    I didn't believe that you will leave from my life shouldn't it be would?
    Oare am sa pot iubi pe-altcinava.
    Will I really be able to love someone else?

    Nu inteleg iubita ce ai cu viata mea
    I don't understand, love, what's wrong with my life(?)
    Din partea mea fetito ai toata dragostea.
    For my part/According to me, girl, you have all the love

    As vrea sa stiu motivul pentru care m-ai uitat
    I'd like to know the motive for which you forgot me
    Fara inteles totul s-a termïnat.
    Senselessly, everything as ended
     
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    Hello again !


    1) "In al noualea cer"
    Would the translation be "On Cloud Nine"? ( Yeah it's good, but don't u think it's better to say - > "On the 9th cloud "?

    Numai noi vom fugi, stelele ne vor privi
    But we'll run, the stars will watch us -)but = Dar, where is 'dar' here ? Numai = only ...so = > Only we will run , .....

    Vreau decat sa ma asculti
    I want so much for you to lisent to me ( this was a bit hard cause it was short style of speech , it should have been " Nu vreau altceva decît să mă asculti" for u to understanding it's meaning ! so it english it`s =>
    I only want you to understand me

    N-am crezut ca vei pleca din viata mea
    I didn't believe that you will leave from my life shouldn't it be would?
    No ! Because with would sentence should have been : N-am crezut ca ai pleca ( ai pleca = u would leave) u said it correct !

    Nu inteleg iubita ce ai cu viata mea
    I don't understand, love, what's wrong with my life(?)
    - - - ........., what you have with my life ( what's your problem with my life)

    Din partea mea fetito ai toata dragostea.
    For my part/According to me, girl, you have all the love
    - - - Din partea mea = From my part


    Very good !!! Animal X was my favorite band when i was teenager
    I am curious, do u listen to songs which u translate ? The song " N-am crezut" was their biggest hit, u should also consider listening to " Iubirea mea" , " Te-am pierdut" and "Mai mult ca oricand"!!!
    Good job again
    " Don't take life too seriously, no one gets out alive. "
     
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    Thanks again Tigress!

    & yes, I only translate the songs I listen to, ha ha.

    Do you recommened any other bands that would be considered the same style as Animal X, Activ or DJ Project?
     
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    Welcome !

    Well nothing is simmilar to Animal X They were unique
    Activ - was good at the beginning - after it got too soft ( for me)
    So I recommend Dj Project and Akcent is good also
    " Don't take life too seriously, no one gets out alive. "
     
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    OK cool. Any rock bands besdies Luna Amara?
     
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    Sure Vita de Vie, Celelalte cuvinte, Trooper, Travka, Iris, Gandul mitei , E.M.I.L , OCS , Phoenix, Pistol cu capse etc

    This si all I can think of ! Most of them are not so famous
    Aren't u interested about hip-hop artists also ?
    " Don't take life too seriously, no one gets out alive. "
     
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    Mersi mult!

    No, I don't really like hip-hop, in any language lol, but thanks!