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1) Akcent - "Umbrela ta"
"Your umbrella"

Si stelele imi zambesc cand esti aici
& the stars smile at me when you're here
Si raze ma privesc cand ma atingi
& (sun)rays watch me when you touch me
Si ploi nu ma gasesc cand sunt langa tine...
& rains don't find me when I'm near you
Lumea imi spune ca da se vede chiar de aici
The world tells me that, yes, it even sees itself here(?)
Ce mult va iubiti se mira chiar si ea
That you(pl.) love each other so much, it even amazes itself(?)
Ai ochii cuminti
You have the quiet eyes
Si e doar vina ta
& it's only your guilt
Ca ma pierd langa tine....
that I lose near you
1,2,3 si :
stau ca un pusti fericit sub umbrela ta
I sit like a happy kid under your umbrella
la doar 2 cm de inima ta
just 2 cm from your heart
si astept un sarut ce imi poate alunga....
& I wait for a kiss that can send away...
norii din viata mea
...the clouds from my life
si astept un sarut ce imi poate schimba...
& I wait for a kiss that can change...
toata viata mea
...my whole life
si in vise eu ma prind de mana ta
& in dreams I lcatch your hand
ma duc eu fara sa vreau spre inima ta
I lead myself, without meaning to, towards your heart
si orice cale aleg ma duce la tine...
& every road I choose brings me to you
noaptea imi spune si ea
The nights talks to me & her
ca te-am vazut cand plangeai din vina mea
that I saw you when you'd cry because of me
si vreau sa sti e greu in lipsa ta
& I want you to know that it's hard in your absence
dar trece prea usor cand sunt langa tine...
But it passes quite easily when I'm near you

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1) Akcent - "Umbrela ta"
"Your umbrella"

Si stelele imi zambesc cand esti aici
& the stars smile at me when you're here
Here we use 'even'because it's better
Si raze ma privesc cand ma atingi
& (sun)rays watch me when you touch me
Si ploi nu ma gasesc cand sunt langa tine...
& rains don't find me when I'm near you
Lumea imi spune ca da se vede chiar de aici
The world tells me that, yes, it even sees itself here(?)
da = dar (but) => The world tells me that but it can be seen even from here
Ce mult va iubiti se mira chiar si ea
That you(pl.) love each other so much, it even amazes itself(?)
How much you love eachother
Ai ochii cuminti
You have the quiet eyes
Without the
Si e doar vina ta
& it's only your guilt
It's better to say fault than guilt
Ca ma pierd langa tine....
that I lose near you
mă pierd=o lose myself=> That I lose myself near you/beside you
1,2,3 si :
stau ca un pusti fericit sub umbrela ta
I sit like a happy kid under your umbrella
la doar 2 cm de inima ta
just 2 cm from your heart
si astept un sarut ce imi poate alunga....
& I wait for a kiss that can send away...
norii din viata mea
...the clouds from my life
si astept un sarut ce imi poate schimba...
& I wait for a kiss that can change...
toata viata mea
...my whole life
si in vise eu ma prind de mana ta
& in dreams I catch your hand
....I hold your hand
ma duc eu fara sa vreau spre inima ta
I lead myself, without meaning to, towards your heart
si orice cale aleg ma duce la tine...
& every road I choose brings me to you
...takes me to you
noaptea imi spune si ea
The nights talks to me & her
The night tells me also(the night is speaking to him)
ca te-am vazut cand plangeai din vina mea
that I saw you when you'd cry because of me
...you were crying because of me
si vreau sa sti e greu in lipsa ta
& I want you to know that it's hard in your absence
dar trece prea usor cand sunt langa tine...
But it passes quite easily when I'm near you
...it passes too easily when...

Mersi mult!