Hi I'm trying to write a song about being weak in the knees (in love) i have written a bit about it but i need people to revise my work (make it work but still with the same words maybe a few new) Well here goes

I'm Weak in the knees for you
It's a feeling i never knew
It's the feeling of ecstacy
feeling of pure bliss it seems
all around but not seen
You got to know love before you feel it.

You've got to know love to have love
You gotta love love for the feeling to rush
I know all this
For i'm week in the knees for you

There's no feeling like this,
No way to explain what you give me
it starts in my heart and goes to my toes
It's what makes me weak in the knees for you

It keeps me up at night
to embrace it, to keep it
Forever i'll treasure it
For it may be the last thing i feel

I'm weak in the knees for you.
My heart gives and pang
and my hands go then the feat
and finally the knees
cause i'm weak in the knees for you.

I hope you like it, i'm thinking that one of the verses will become the chorus but it all depends on what you change to make it work. i have an idea of what to do for the tune but not fully (i'll put it in in a bit)

Thanks for reading.
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